Without the creation of images, any work of writing would become extremely boring and commonplace. It would be simply reading words off a page without the opportunity to understand beyond the text, lunge into the fantasy of a story, become submersed in the author’s emotion, or even be drawn in enough to continue a book past the first couple pages. Even text books create images to try to put a picture in to one's mind and lead to a deeper understanding of the topic. Authors get into the habit of creating images to keep the story fascinating and to encourage feelings in the reader. Good authors, in a sense, are masters of emotion. Whether the story is true or fictional, a good author can get someone to feel a specific way about a scene or event through the creation of images. Mary Karr does a phenomenal job with creating imagery in her memoir, The Liar's Club, because she delivers everything needed, from her graphic language to the enticing detail, to get the reader to feel the emotion in the story without holding back. Mary Karr dives deeper into detail upon significant events in her life, as well as when she is on the topic of her father. She uses a great deal of detail in the simple images regarding her father in order to convey that she is longing to be with her father and that she cherishes her memories of him.
It seems as if Mary Karr is holding on to every possible ounce of memory of her father because it seems as if she makes it a point to recall every ounce of detail about him and he seems to be the only adult to truly care for her and love her, even though he does not make the best decisions all the time. "I hear about Daddy doing this kind of meanness, and I see guys shy away when he strolls over to a pool table, but he handles me like I'm something glass. Even his spankings are mild enough to be symbolic. When I got up cold this morning before we set out for the bayou, he warmed my socks over the gas heater before I pulled them on....My daddy buys me whatever I ask for and tells me he loves me better than anybody about fifty times a day. I've seen him fight, but I've never seen this sneaky meanness he talks about in the Liar's Club. I look at him scrubbing the blood out from under his fingernails with a pale blue plastic brush and wonder about it."(169)
In this passage Mary Karr expresses how much she loves her father and how much he loves her. She emphasizes how she could never see him being characterized as having a "sneaky meanness," and that he handles her with the utmost gentleness. This passage creates the image that though her father can be characterized by others as having a meanness, he would never express that side of himself to Mary because he loves her and would do anything for her. She becomes curious if he could really be that mean because she has seen him in fights but she has never seen him take on such a meanness that he speaks of to his friends. It could be that her father is making up stories about his meanness to his friends to try to make himself have a harder exterior. It also could be that he actually had that ferociousness inside of him however he refuses to express that side for the love of his daughters. Mary is possibly curious about this side of him because she wants to know as much as possible about her father because he is the only adult which she feels a strong love and connection to.
Mary Karr also fills her memory with details about her father's exterior and appearance down to the labels on his clothing. "There in the headlights shining across the empty stall, stood the lanky,big-handed figure of Daddy in loose khakis. He had on a baseball cap with Lone Star State embroidered on it. Under the logo was a yellow star that caught just enough moon to make itself seen. I rode toward that star. Under the brim lay a broad pit of dark. His face stayed in the dark. and the quiet that came with it, all he way home." (191)
This is evidence that Mary Karr strives to remember a great deal of details about her father. She remembers what he wears, what his face looks like, what he says, and when he is silent. She searches for comfort in her father and she strives to hold on to all possible emotions and bits and pieces of information about him because when she is with him she is comfortable. When she is with her father she feels loved and secure, despite the fact that he is a drinker because his drinking does not get in the way of his love and his life. It seems as if Mary Karr wants the reader to see her father in the beautiful light that she sees him in, despite his flaws. He loves her and that is all she needs.
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Nice writing, but I don't really know if your thesis statement is very argumentative. Your kind of summarizing because what's being said in your blog is something we could on pick up on just by reading the book alone. Your blog is in a way just reminding us, instead of pointing out something some of us wouldn't have noticed before. Sorry if that sounded mean, I'm only trying to help as much as possible sense 30% of the grade is in our hands. Try to find something deeper that has to do with her dad. Like "Mary's has way more love for her dad than she does for her mom"? Just for example. Do you see how many people can argue with this with other quotes from the book, but you could easily argue back with what you've already written. They would be more enlightened by what you wrote if they didn't agree already. Just throwing it out there though, goodluck.
ReplyDelete1.) If I'm reading this right, I believe that the thesis is that, Mary uses a great deal of detail in the simple images regarding her father in order to convey that she is longing to be with her father and that she cherishes her memories of him. This is certainly true, but I'm not sure if it is argumentative. I just think it would be tough to find evidence to counter this statement. The quotes need an introduction, but other than that they're good.
ReplyDelete2.) The name of the author and work are identified around halfway through the introduction. I guess it could be moved up, but I think it fits fine where it is.
3.) There isn't a lot of summarizing, it's more analytical and works to prove your thesis.
4.) I would honestly be hard pressed to find any arguments against this, mainly because Mary seems to adore her father.
5.) I'm having a tough time finding grammatical errors. The only thing that caught my eye was the sentence that starts the second paragraph seems really long and could probably be broken up.
6.) There is a little bit of opinion, but I think this just leads to a personal debate about what something means. So in a way it is serving as proof.
7.) The essay deals with how Mary feels about her father throughout. So it seems to be on-track and focused.
Danielle,
ReplyDeleteSo much run-up to what is approaching a quite good thesis. This is just responding to the first paragraph. I agree with Georden that it's not quite argumentative enough as it stands. If you're more specific right off that bat, it might help.
I would begin with "Mary Karr does a phenomenal job. . ."
1. The thesis seems to me to be the last sentence of your first paragraph. My only problem with it is that it seems more descriptive then argumentive.
ReplyDelete1b. You got Mary Karr's name and the title out pretty quickly, nice job. One thing though, the apostrophe is after the 's' in The Liars' Club.
2. The quotes you used work really well with what you're proving in your thesis. The analysis comes right after and ties in well with the thesis as well.
3. Not much summarizing but there is enough to focus in on what's going on.
4. Not many counter-arguments can be made, aside from someone who might still see the father as a 'bad guy' still, though it seems pretty evident that he's not.
5. I don't think I can find any errors, aside from the one about the title I pointed out earlier.
6. I think most of your opinions are proven by the book so they aren't really used as fact alone.
7. The entire blog seems on track and never loses focus from the thesis.